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Persuasive writing

This is my persuasive writing and in this writing it’s like you are in a commercial telling people to buy something.

Jelly bean table: Do you want to buy a table well here’s a jelly bean table the table fits 7 chairs and it’s a red Jelly bean table you can make it lower and higher again it’s $20 off and 50% off and
You can guarantee to buy it call 0800 jelly and the price is $106 and $99 off if you buy it

today.


Disclaimers: Not found at The Hussein bargains.

Comments

  1. Ha Ha I love this writing, its great next time you should look through the writing and see if it makes sensce.

    Lochlan RM12

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